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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum out weight the disadvantages?

Museums can always attract great public attention for the significant role of protecting and spreading knowledge they play in the world. In order to better the maintenance of museum, some people suggest that many should be requested for the entrance of museum. However, although I understand funds are crucial to improve exhibition quality and the protection of exhibits, Ido not believe there are more advantages of charging for admission than disadvantages.

The biggest shortage of charging entrance fee is that it prevent the visiting of some people especially the poor. Museum is a chest of human treasure. It plays an important role of education by collecting and displaying hundreds and thousands of items of d