維護和平,zzzz的作文

篇一：對比觀點作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “Wealth

and Health.” You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)1.一些人認為數據庫威脅個人隱私

2.另一些人認為數據庫有利於提高工作效率

3.我的看法

My view on Data Collection

Data collection is a fact of modern life引出話題)tool which increases efficiency. (引出爭議性觀點data collection does more good than harm. (作者觀點)

contain information on many individuals can enable more effective decisions to be made. Institutions such as government departments and police rely on data collection in order to operate efficiently, and hospitals use computerized records to help in their fight against disease. (承1) databases stored on computer can also be very efficient. Data which h